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<br />Page 1 ofl <br /> <br />" <br />, <br />.. <br /> <br />. <br />. <br /> <br />Kim Stephan <br /> <br />leBlanc, Wayne J [Wayne.leBlanc@UNISYS.comj <br />Monday, May 06. 2002 1:33 PM <br />'Seeley Suzanne'; Karla Devine; leBlanc, Wayne J; Tom lee; Kathy Pail; Tedd Peten;on; Kim <br />Stephan; Brian Walter <br />Subject: RE: Pk and Rae Volunteer brochure (Feedback) <br /> <br />From: <br /> <br />Sent: <br />To: <br /> <br />Here's some feedback on the volunteer brochure... <br /> <br />'l.'hi'Li8 .iil__el':CeUent Qro<:::hu,z::~U_L <IQJ)~1ie1-1- don~_Su~anneJJ'- <br /> <br />Consider these couple ideas: <br /> <br />It looks like the "last" page has a fair amount of room on it. The phone number <br />is repeated twice. Consider moving the city address, web page URL, etc to the <br />bottom of the previous column (where the big phone number is). That would leave <br />the whole "last" page blank. Now use that space to list the Parks and a very <br />brief description (as we thought of doing in the trail map handout). Just put <br />whatever will fit on that page. <br /> <br />I'm uncomfortable with the CDRS reference. If it's there, the city may have to <br />explain what company it is and why that company created this brochure, etc. I'm <br />afraid it crosses a line I'd rather not crass. <br /> <br />Four of the five bullets are lling" words - to match, perhaps make the first <br />bullet something like: <br />Spring cleaning of parks and trails. Also consider expanding the "Building... II <br />bullet to perhaps "Building and assembling various park structures such as <br />playgrounds or birdhouses." <br /> <br />Again, it's a great brochure. I hope the city will go for it. <br /> <br />Thanks. <br /> <br />vlayne LeBlanc <br /> <br />--Original Message-- <br />From: Seeley Suzanne [mallro:skseeley@yahoo.oom] <br />sent: Friday, May 03, 2002 8:09 PM <br />Subject: PI< and Rec Volunteer brochure <br /> <br />5/7102 <br />