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Margaret Driscoll <br />From: dan. roe@comcast. net <br />Sent: Wednesday, October 15, 2008 1:31 PM <br />To: Margaret Driscoll <br />Subject: Re: 10/13/08 Draft Minutes <br />Attachments: 10/13/08 Draft Minutes <br />10/13/08 Draft <br />Minutes <br />Hello, Margaret. <br />Suggested corrections/changes: <br />As to substance & content: <br />P 6, line 17: Insert the following new and additional paragraph: "Councilmember Roe <br />asked whether there were any other changes in the proposed contract over the previous <br />contract, and Captain Mathwig confirmed that there were none." <br />P 7, line 19: replace "majority" with "super-majority" <br />P 8, line 17: change "...for distribution may prove..." to "...for distribution with a <br />3-2 vote may prove..." (I suggest that this more accurately reflects the mayor's point.) <br />P 12, line 26: replace the following: <br />" ..at their September 11, 2008 meeting, and not respectful of individual judgments taken, <br />and not as a result of..." <br />with this: <br />" ..at their September 11, 2008 meeting, as not respectful of individual judgments taken, <br />not as a result of..." <br />P 13, line 9: replace "rates" with "rents" <br />P 20, line 12: delete rest of sentence after the word "plans" (The language to be <br />deleted does not correctly express what I had said, and it is probably most easily fixed <br />by just deleting it.) <br />P 24, line 7: change "north and west" to "north and east" (Verify with CD dept) <br />P 28, line 39: Change "The meeting was adjourned at 10:30 p.m." to "The meeting was <br />reconvened in open session and adjourned at 10:30 p.m." <br />As to possible corrections: <br />P 2, lines 25-37: If she prefers, replace references to "Ms. Millasovich" to "Ms. <br />Jackson-Millasovich." <br />P 11, line 15 (and rest of paragraph): I believe the name is Schreuers, or a similar <br />spelling. <br />P 13, line 4 (and rest of paragraph): I believe the name is Hulme, not Hume. <br />1 <br />